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Fantastic story! I was dreading every moment up to the ending. Very well done!

This game has some neat writing and the spooky effects with the text are excellent. It’s just a well-executed short story!

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Oh my.  I love the atmosphere so much, and it's amazing how much a little shaking text can add

I never played one of these games before where you kinda interact with the words, it was really fun and a unique experience, though I didn't really get the ending

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Super fun!

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the ending

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loved the story it had so much depth and detail.
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A fantastic short story! It's not a long read but it's dripping with atmosphere. Tense and lonely and sparse enough on details to leave you with unanswered questions at the end, like good horror usually does. Definitely worth a read if you like the genre.

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This was such an amazing story: I read it while making breakfast, and felt so much tension. I really loved Amanda's POV, and I really love the ending. It brings that creeping feeling of horror full circle!

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This was such a cool little story with a lot of unsettling little details!!! I loved the feeling that she was being pulled back there despite all her attempts to grow up, and the illustration at the end really sealed the feeling it was summoning up.